Part 8. The World Series

Grammar Smart 3rd Edition - Princeton Review 2014


Part 8. The World Series

It’s all here: parts of speech, parts of the sentence, tense, parallel construction, misplaced modifiers, faulty comparisons, idioms, diction, redundancy, voice and mood, agreement. If you find yourself repeatedly missing questions on a particular subject, then by all means, go back and review.

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The answers to the questions can be found in the Answer Key.

Quiz #1:

In parentheses at the end of each sentence you are given a part of speech. In the blanks, write in the appropriate form of that part of speech. There may be more than one correct answer; you need to write in only one of them.

1. Dinosaurs ... the earth for more than 100 million years before becoming extinct.

(verb: to roam)

2. In the badlands of Montana paleontologists have discovered dinosaur nests as well as fossils different ... those found at other sites. (preposition)

3. There ..., according to any paleontologist you might ask, myriad controversies about the behavior and even the physical appearance of most dinosaurs. (verb: to be)

4. The small boys, one of ... was an expert on dinosaurs, were thrilled to go on a trip to the museum of natural history. (relative pronoun)

5. The boys took pictures of the giant fossil skeletons, quizzed each other on the names of obscure reptiles, and ... a riot in the cafeteria. (verb: to cause)

Quiz #2

Pick One

You’ve got two choices. Pick the correct one.

1. Rhonda woke up one morning to find herself afflicted (by, with) mumps.

2. (Her, She) and her brother Maximilian had to drink soup through straws because mumps made eating impossible.

3. “If I (were, was) you, I would not look in the mirror,” said Maximilian.

4. “I am totally (disinterested in, indifferent to) anything you have to say, Fatface,” answered Rhonda.

5. The period of convalescence, (which, that) lasted over a week, gave Rhonda and Maximilian enough time to get tired of fighting with each other.

Quiz #3:

Error ID

Circle the underlined error, or circle E if there is no error.

Quiz #4:

Match It

Match the correct pronoun from the list at the bottom. Don’t use any pronoun more than once, and some pronouns won’t be used at all.

a. whatever    e. who    i. themselves  m. herself

b. whomever    f. her (or his)   j. each    n whichever

c. those    g. himself    k. whom    o. them

d. their     h. that    I. they p. which

1. The beautiful actress, ... we have seen perform on stage as well as in movies, has gotten ... a facelift.

2. All members of the audience believe ..., and no one else, understands the true depth of her performance.

3. During the late show, all the theater-goers took ... seats long before the lights were dimmed.

4. The many years of study, ... she paid for by working menial jobs, finally paid off when the actress got her first lead role.

5. The actress was beloved by others ... worked in the industry, because she never ignored ... who had helped her along the way.

Quiz #5:

Q&A

1. What’s the rule for subject-verb agreement?

2. What does a gerund look like? What part of speech does a gerund function as?

3. What parts of speech do adverbs modify?

4. What are collective nouns, and what do you have to remember about them?

5. What are the two situations in which to use the subjunctive?

Quiz #6:

Phrase Substitution

Pick the best answer.

1. Succeeding at a career in the arts—whether literature, fine arts, or theater—is more difficult succeeding in business.

A) than succeeding

B) than success

C) than success is

D) from succeeding

E) from success

2. One should avoid eating excessive amounts of fat, especially animal fat, if you want to stay fit and healthy.

A) One should avoid eating excessive amounts

B) One should avoid the eating of an excessive amount

C) One should, by avoiding eating excessive quantities

D) You should avoid eating excessive amounts

E) You should have an avoidance to eating excessive quantities

3. The reason thousands of young people come to live in New York City every year is because New York offers the chance to realize ambitions in nearly every sphere, whether in the arts or in business.

A) is because New York offers

B) is that New York offers

C) being that New York can offer

D) are that New York is offering

E) are because New York offers

4. Like James Joyce, Henry James worked to develop a literary style that rendered reality in an unprecedented way.

A) Like James Joyce

B) As for James Joyce

C) As did James Joyce

D) Similar to James Joyce

E) Similarly to James Joyce

5. The study of economics, both micro and macro, are necessary to understanding political science.

A) are necessary to understanding

B) are necessary in the understanding of

C) is necessary for understanding

D) is a necessity in the understanding of

E) is necessary to understanding

Quiz #7:

Fix It

Correct the following sentences.

1. The purpose of art is not to instruct, but allowing a person to experience an emotional response to the work.

2. Serious political discussion are better left to essays and speeches, where arguments can be developed and objections raised and commented upon.

3. Nevertheless, you can easily think of many masterpieces, like Picasso’s Guernica, which demand that you consider the political event that inspired it.

4. Writers who I consider among my favorites have never written directly about politics, although I could argue that a political ethic underlies their work.

5. Rather than comply to some so-called politically correct notion of what art should be about, the artists I most admire create their work from their own obsessions, which may or may not be political.

Quiz #8:

Match It

The following sentence fragments invite certain grammatical errors. Match the fragment with the error that you would need to watch out for. (This quiz is especially useful if you plan to take the SAT II: Writing and the GMAT.)

1. Among the many reasons for his failure were...

2. Unlike transistor radios...

3. The reason the world is falling apart...

4. When one plants a garden...

5. Exhausted from undressing...

a. faulty comparison      e. subject-verb agreement

b. pronoun agreement      f. misplaced modifier

c. subjunctive mood       g. passive/active voice

d. parallel construction      h. redundancy

Quiz #9:

Pick One

You’ve got two choices. Pick the correct one.

1. We will, (hopefully, it is hoped), someday live in a city that takes care of its poor.

2. What is wrong with (my, me) coming to dinner early?

3. The writer’s new book has been bought by a stupendous (amount, number) of readers, none of whom will actually read the book.

4. The lottery jackpot was divided (among, between) the four cousins, who had combined their birthdays for their winning numbers.

5. Pinky, along with Ralphie and Gomez, (are, is) asleep on the sofa under a pile of newspapers.

Quiz #10:

Q&A

1. What’s the rule for parallel construction?

2. When would you use fewer, and when would you use less?

3. What’s the difference between ambiguous and ambivalent?

4. What is redundancy?

5. How do you find the subject of a sentence?

Quiz #11:

Jeopardy!

Listed below are answers—you give the questions. Remember to phrase your question as “What is ...” or “What are ...” just like on Jeopardy. The category is Parts of Speech.

1. only, roughly, often, insidiously

2. but, because, if, yet

3. death, sex, glory, denial

4. Wow! Ha! Ouch! Oof!

5. in, at, with, to

Quiz #12:

Error Identification

Pick the error. If there isn’t an error, pick E.

Quiz #13:

Mark It

The following sentence need punctuating. Go for it.

1. Before eating Mindy packed four items for her trip a mousetrap a hairbrush a mug in the shape of a duck and a canned ham

2. Canned ham was Mindys favorite food she ate it as least once a day usually washing it down with a root beer float

3. I can’t wait to leave for Costa Rica shouted Mindy clutching her guidebook under her arm and doing a jig

4. Costa Rica which is west of Panama is extremely mountainous Mindy had packed hiking gear along with a couple of extra canned hams for emergencies on the trail

5. Mindy said that it was entirely possible that her life could be saved by a canned ham if she found herself lost in the rainforest with no knowledge of which plants were edible

Quiz #14:

Fill-ins

Fill in each blank with the correct preposition.

1. If you tamper ... the lawn mower, the blade may fly off and now somebody down.

2. Lawn mowers, in the advertising fantasies of the suburbs, are depicted ... useful practicalities, but in fact, they are ear-splitting machines of destruction.

3. If you are in search ... a way to cut your grass, consider buying a grazing animal or using a manual lawn mower.

4. One big advantage of grazing animals, which makes them superior ... other methods of lawn management, is that they provide their own high-quality fertilizer at absolutely no cost to the owner.

5. Total dependence of the suburbanite ... machines that run on fossil fuels results ... a life not quite so carefree, or guilt-free, as the sitcoms of the 1950s would lead us to believe.

Quiz #15:

Phrase Substitution

Pick the best answer.

1. During the presidency of George Bush, the economy went into a recession, and it made his reelection highly unlikely, no matter what other issues were raised.

A) During the presidency of George Bush, the economy went into a recession, and it

B) The presidency of George Bush, during which the economy went into a recession,

C) While George Bush was the president, the economy went into a recession, and

D) The recession of the economy that occurred during the presidency of George Bush E) The economy’s going into recession during the presidency of George Bush

2. After buying an apartment during the real estate boom of the eighties, the couple hoped it would make further investments for their financial security unnecessary.

A) it would make further investments for their financial security unnecessary

B) they would, for their financial security, not necessarily need to make further investments

C) that the purchase would make further investments for their financial security unnecessary

D) that, having made the purchase, they would then have no necessity for making further investments for their financial security

E) further investments for their financial securer will be unnecessary

3. Although the great blizzard seemed to hit it the hardest, Mootown was really just one of many towns in the path of the storm that was without electricity and phone service for nearly a week.

A) was without electricity and phone service for nearly a week

B) was without both electricity and phone service for almost a week

C) being without both electricity and phone service for close to a week

D) were without electricity, as well as phone service, for upwards of a week

E) were without electricity and phone service for nearly a week

4. Because whales do not feed on creatures high on the food chain, as sharks do, they must consume mind-boggling quantities of their preferred food, which is known as krill.

A) as sharks do

B) as does a shark

C) like a shark

D) like sharks

E) unlike sharks

5. The economic advisers recommend that interest rates will not be changed until the next fiscal year.

A) that interest rates will not be changed

B) that interest rates not be changed

C) interest rates not to change

D) no changing of the rates of interest

E) interest rates to not change

Quiz #16:

Q&A

1. What’s the difference between effect and affect?

2. What’s the rule for among and between?

3. When is it correct to begin a sentence with because?

4. What is the difference between compare to and compare with?

5. What is the difference between a phrase and a clause?

Quiz #17:

Pick One

You’ve got two choices. Pick the better one.

1. When green slime started to ooze from the newscaster’s ear, the audience was horrified and (nauseated, nauseous).

2. (Like, As do) humans, dogs and cats enjoy spending some part of their day playing.

3. The lizard (lies, lays) on the rock and closes his beady eyes.

4. It was (he, him) who won the prize.

5. In 1902, my grandmother, dressed in petticoats and a fur hat, (has been, was) arrested and thrown in jail.

Quiz #18:

Fix It

The following sentences may have an error or two, or even three. Or they may be correct. Fix them if necessary.

1. One of the first things to find out, when starting a new job, are the location of the coffee machine, where employees gather to spread rumors and complain about the boss.

2. It seems to be true that there is always one loudmouth in every workplace, who attempts to take credit for any innovation and never takes the blame for screw-ups.

3. Among the reasons Buffy quit her job were that she was bored, that she had no further chance of promotion, and she had a better offer in another city.

4. Wandering aimlessly through the city, there were several tragic events that the writer witnessed and recorded in her notebook.

5. The boss sent a memo to Buffy and I, recommending that we should be on time to work.

Quiz #19:

Jeopardy!

Hey! It’s TV time again. Phrase your answer in the "What is ...” or “What are ...” format. The category is Parts of the Sentence, including phrases (gerund, prepositional, participial, infinitive) and clauses (noun, adjective, adverb). Focus on the italicized part of the sentence and identify the part of the sentence.

1. After her long trip, Zippy had a difficult time readjusting to her daily life.

2. One day in the shower she noticed that her leg were covered with red spots.

3. Scrubbing the spots vigorously, Zippy wondered if she had parasites, and if so, whether the parasites were fatal.

4. Wanting to set her mind at ease, she called her friend Nippy, who was a respected doctor at the local hospital.

5. Maybe eating the local food without taking any precautions was a bad idea.

Quiz #20:

Match It

Using the following sentences, match each verb, in List B, with its subject, in List A. List A includes some words that aren’t subjects. Ignore them.

1. Wanda is one of the millions of women who dye their eyebrows.

2. Frogs, which are amphibians, have a variety of defenses to ward off predators.

3. Zippy’s favorite food, no matter what season it is, happens to be chili.

4. After walking all the way downtown, Buffy and her friends realized they had forgotten their shoes.

5. Driving without a license is one way to get a ticket.

Quiz #21:

Error ID

Circle the error. If there isn’t an error, circle E.

Quiz #22:

Pick One

Again, two choices. Pick the correct one.

1. If, after seeing the photographs, Ronald (had, would have) contacted the police, possibly he would not now be awaiting trial in the city jail.

2. In his deposition, Ronald made an (allusion, illusion) to Ezra Pound.

3. Ronald was one of the criminals who (claim, claims) innocence no matter how convincing the evidence against them might be.

4. Mercy was what, in his testimony, he asked (of, from) the jury.

5. While he waited for the jury to reach (its, their) verdict, Ronald saw the photograph on the stack of papers on the table in front of his lawyers, and wondered whether (it, they) might be able to save him.

Quiz #23:

Jeopardy!

Each of the following sentences has an error. Your question should identify it. Example: He are here. What is subject-verb agreement?

1. Winky, who was hard of hearing, loves geraniums more than Zippy.

2. Zippy’s favorite thing was socks; and he particularly loved socks that had a floral design and reinforced toes.

3. Although they had paid for the tickets and packed for the long trip, Zippy was still worried about trailing with Winky, because they had never been able to cooperate together.

4. Irregardless of whether the weather was hot, Zippy wore socks, much to the dismay of Winky, who had an enviable sense of fashion.

5. Dragging his massive suitcase toward the elevator, Winky’s passport was still lying on the table in the hallway instead of being tucked away in a safe place for traveling.

Quiz #24:

Q&A

1. When do you use lie, and when do you use lay?

2. When do you use bring, and when do you use take?

3. What’s a split infinitive?

4. What’s the difference between infer and imply?

5. What’s the rule for using hyphens with compound adjectives?

Quiz #25:

You’re on Your Own

1. Write a sentence with a comparison, making sure it isn’t a faulty comparison.

2. Write a sentence using correct parallel construction.

3. Write a sentence using at least three pronouns, Make sure to watch out for agreement, case, and ambiguity.

4. Write a sentence that begins with a modifying phrase, and make sure it isn’t a misplaced modifier.

5. Write a sentence with two independent clauses joined by a semicolon. Make sure your subjects and verb agree.