Sentence Errors: Fragments - Chapter 8 Writing Correct and Complete Sentences - Part 3 Sentence Sense

English Grammar for the Utterly Confused - Laurie Rozakis 2003

Sentence Errors: Fragments
Chapter 8 Writing Correct and Complete Sentences
Part 3 Sentence Sense

As its name suggests, a sentence fragment is a group of words that do not express a complete thought. Most times, a fragment is missing a subject, a verb, or both. Other times, a fragment may have a subject and a verb but still not express a complete thought. Fragments can be phrases as well as clauses.

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Sentence fragments are common and acceptable in speech, but not in writing— unless you are recreating dialogue in a short story or novel.

There are three main ways that fragments occur.

1. Fragments occur when a dependent clause masquerades as a sentence. Because more and more teenagers are staying up far too late.

Since they do not compensate for the sleep they miss.

2. Fragments also happen when a phrase is cut off from the sentence it describes. Used to remove a wide variety of stains on carpets and upholstery.

Trying to prevent the new cotton shirt from shrinking in the dryer.

3. You can also create a fragment if you use the wrong form of a verb.

The frog gone to the pond by the reservoir.

Saffron being a very costly and pungent spice.

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Don’t be misled by a capital letter at the beginning of a word group. Starting a group of words with a capital letter doesn’t make the word group a sentence. It just makes it a fragment that starts with a capital letter.

You can correct a fragment three ways:

1. Add the missing part to the sentence.

Fragment: Because more and more teenagers are staying up far too late.

Complete: Because more and more teenagers are staying up far too late, they are sleep deprived.

Fragment: Since they do not compensate for the sleep they miss.

Complete: Since they do not compensate for the sleep they miss, teenagers often get cranky in the afternoon.

Fragment: Used to remove a wide variety of stains on carpets and upholstery.

Complete: This product is used to remove a wide variety of stains on carpets and upholstery.

Fragment: Trying to prevent the new cotton shirt from shrinking in the dryer.

Complete: Jean was trying to prevent the new cotton shirt from shrinking in the dryer.

2. Correct the misused verb.

Fragment: The frog gone to the pond by the reservoir.

Complete: The frog went to the pond by the reservoir.

Fragment: Saffron being a very costly and pungent spice.

Complete: Saffron is a very costly and pungent spice.

3. Omit the subordinating conjunction or connect it to another sentence.

Fragment: Because more and more teenagers are staying up far too late.

Complete: More and more teenagers are staying up far too late.

Fragment: Since they do not compensate for the sleep they miss.

Complete: They do not compensate for the sleep they miss.

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