Exploring Writing - Gary Robert Muschla 2011

Using Adjectives and Adverbs Wisely
Part 2. Writing the Draft

Adjectives and adverbs are useful for adding details to writing. But many students use too many adjectives and adverbs. Some overuse these modifiers thinking that more details will make their writing better. The opposite is true. Too many adjectives and adverbs weaken writing. Adjectives and adverbs should be used only when necessary.

Following are some examples of unnecessary adjectives and adverbs:

✵ green grass (Unless the grass is dead or the season is winter, grass is green.)

✵ totally surprised (Can someone be partially surprised?)

✵ completely fooled (A person is either fooled or not fooled.)

✵ happy smile (Most smiles arise from happiness. The exception is a sad smile.)

While adjectives and adverbs have a purpose in sentences, they should be chosen with care. Instead of bland modifiers, you should seek ones that provide sharp details.

To gain an understanding and appreciation of the use of adjectives and adverbs, find examples in your reading. Notice how the proper use of adjectives or adverbs can strengthen writing. For practice using adjectives and adverbs wisely in your writing, do Worksheets 2.9, 2.10, and 2.11 at the end of this section.