Writing ability - Verbal strategies

Gruber's Essential Guide to Test Taking: Grades 6-9 - Gruber Gary R. 2019

Writing ability
Verbal strategies

There are essentially five ways writing ability can be measured. They are by testing:

1spelling

2punctuation and capitalization

3grammar and usage

4diction, style, and sentence structure

5logic and organization

In the exercises below, we will look at the types of questions asked in each of the above categories. Llowcvcr, instead of you or your child having to wade through a set of rules for each category, you are only going to see some sentences that are incorrect, which you will then learn how to correct. You are only going to work with the most important and typical sentences and corrections, so that your child, with the least amount of effort, should be able to answer many questions involving writing rules and techniques.

After you have gone over each of the exercises in this chapter, show the questions to your child and describe to him or her how the correct answers are obtained (as demonstrated in this book).

Spelling

In the following exercise, each question consists of five words. Select the word that is spelled incorrectly. If all five words are spelled correctly, mark the answer F.

1 (A) strenuous

(B) deceive

(C) salaried

(E) mislaid

2 (A) imaginary

(B) ammount

(C) homespun

(D) sluggish

(E) attic

3 (A) tedious

(B) rellinquish

(C) peddle

(D) pasteurize

(E) dissuade

4 (A) parashute

(B) hiccup

(C) argument

(D) physics

(E) opponent

5 (A) anesthetic

(B) virtuoso

(C) consecrate

(D) afirmation

(E) alcohol

6 (A) sophistacated

(B) predisposed

(B) taboo

(D) carreer

(D) regimentation

(E) professor

7 (A) explosive

(B) galery

(C) idol

(D) keynote

(E) confident

8 (A) eloquence

(B) specimen

(C) beggar

(D) dazling

(E) mysterious

9 (A) plaintiff

(B) degree

(C) hostility

(D) cauterize

(E) anchered

10 (A) quarantine

(B) proverbial

(C) adaptation

(D) disernment

(E) stupidity

After you have looked at these questions, have your child try them, and go over the answers with him or her, making the necessary corrections.

ANSWERS

1(D) career

2(B) amount

3(B) relinquish

4(A) parachute

5(D) affirmation

6(A) sophisticated

7(B) gallery

8(D) dazzling

9(E) anchored

10(D) discernment

Now have your child answer the following questions. Check his or her answers with those given below to see whether he or she has approached them correctly.

Directions: Each question consists of five words. Select the word that is spelled incorrectly. If all five words are spelled correctly, mark the answer F.

QUESTIONS

1 (A) renewel

(B) charitable

(C) abrupt

(D) possession

(E) strengthen

2 (A) khaki

(B) survival

(C) laboratory

(D) intensefied

(E) stature

3 (A) diesel

(B) cocoa

(C) alphabettical

(D) visible

(E) overlaid

4 (A) neutral

(B) ballot

(C) parallysis

(D) enterprise

(E) abnormal

5 (A) ironic

(B) mountainous

(C) permissible

(D) carburetor

(E) blizard

6 (A) penalty

(B) affidavit

(C) document

(D) notery

(E) valid

7 (A) provocative

(B) apparition

(C) forfiet

(D) procedure

(E) requisite

8 (A) terrifying

(B) museum

(C) minimum

(D) competitors

(E) efficency

9 (A) hangar

(B) spokesman

(C) mustache

(D) cathederal

(E) pumpkin

10 (A) guidance

(B) until

(C) usage

(D) loyalist

(E) prarie

11 (A) travel

(B) conductor

(C) equiping

(D) proposal

(E) twofold

12 (A) philosopher

(B) minority

(C) managment

(D) emergency

(E) bibliography

13 (A) constructive

(B) employee

(C) stalwart

(D) masterpeice

(E) theoretical

14 (A) dissappoint

(B) volcanic

(C) illiterate

(D) myth

(E) superficial

15 (A) totally

(B) penninsula

(C) sandwich

(D) ripening

(E) salvation

16 (A) pastel

(B) aisle

(C) primarly

(D) journalistic

(E) diminished

17 (A) warrier

(B) unification

(C) enamel

(D) defendant

(E) sustained

18 (A) incidental

(B) lubricent

(C) conversion

(D) jurisdiction

(E) interpretation

19 (A) auxilary

(B) boundaries

(C) session (meeting)

(D) fabric

(E) ceiling

20 (A) imperious

(B) depreciate

(C) rebutal

(D) wharf

(E) giddy

ANSWERS

1 (A)renewal

2 (D)intensified

3 (C)alphabetical

4 (C)paralysis

5 (E)blizzard

6 (D)notary

7 (C)forfeit

8 (E)efficiency

9 (D)cathedral

10 (E)prairie

11 (C)equipping

12 (C)management

13 (D)masterpiece

14 (A)disappoint

15 (B)peninsula

16 (C)primarily

17 (A)warrior

18 (B)lubricant

19 (A)auxiliary

20 (C)rebuttal

THE ONE THOUSAND MOST COMMONLY MISSPELLED WORDS

Here’s a table of one thousand commonly misspelled words. If your child is weak in spelling, you may want to go over these words (twenty at a time). You may also want to dictate the words (twenty at a time) to see whether he or she knows the correct spelling.

abbreviate

absence

absorption

absurd

abundance

academic

academically

academy

accept

acceptable

acceptance

accepting

access

accessible

accidental

accidentally

acclaim

accommodate

accompanied

accompaniment

accompanying

accomplish

accumulate

accuracy

accurately

accuser

accusing

accustom

achievement

acknowledge

acquaintance

acquire

acquitted

across

actuality

actually

address

adequately

adjectival

admission

admittance

adolescence

adolescent

advantageous

advertisement

advertiser

advertising

advice

advise

adviser

affect

afraid

against

aggravate

aggressive

alleviate

alley(s)

allotment

allotted

allowed

all right

ally(ies)

already

altar

alter

all together

altogether

alumna(ae)

alumnus(i)

always

amateur

among

amount

analysis

analyze

anecdote

anger

angel

angle

annual

annually

another

answer

anticipated

anxiety

apartment

apologetically

apologized

apology

apparatus

apparent

appearance

applies

applying

appreciation

approaches

appropriate

approximate

arctic

arguing

argument

arise

arising

arithmetic

arouse

arousing

arrangement

arranging

arrival

article

artillery

ascend

ascent

ask

asked

assassin

assent

association

atheist

athlete

athletic(s)

attempt(s)

attendance

attended

attitude

attractive

audience

author

authoritative

authorities

automobile

auxiliary

available

awful

awkward

balance

balloon

barbarous

bargain

baring

barrel

barring

basically

battalion

bearing

beauteous

beautiful

beauty

because

become

becoming

before

began

beggar

beginner

beginning

behavior

belief

believe

beneficial

benefited

besiege

biscuit

borne

boundaries

breath

breathe

brilliance

Britain

Briton

buoyant

bureau

burial

buried

bury

business

busy

calendar

Calvary

campaign

candidate

can’t

capital

capitalism

capitol

captain

career

careful

carried

carrier

carrying

catarrh

catastrophe

category

cavalry

cemetery

certainly

challenge

changeable

changing

characteristic

characterized

chauffeur

cheese

chief

children

chimney

chocolate

choice

choose

chose

Christian

Christianity

cigarette

cite

cliff

clothes

coarse

colloquial

colonel

column

coming

commerce

commercial

commission

committed

committee

committee

communist

companies

comparatively

comparison

compatible

compel

compelled

competent

competition

competitive

competitor

complement

completely

compliment

compulsory

concede

conceivable

conceive

concentrate

concern

condemn

confusion

connoisseur

connotation

conqueror

conscience

conscientious

conscious

continuously

control

controlled

controversial

controversy

convenience

convenient

coolly

corollary

corps

corpse

correlate

council

counsel

counselor

counterfeit

countries

course

courteous

courtesy

crises

criticism

criticize

cruelly

cruelty

curiosity

curious

curriculum

curvaceous

custom

cylinder

dairy

dealt

debater

deceit

deceive

decent

decided

decision

defendant

deferred

deficient

define

definitely

definition

dependent

descendant

descent

describe

description

desert

desirability

desirable

desire

despair

desperate

dessert

destruction

detriment

devastating

develop

device

devise

diary

dictionary

difference

difficult

dilemma

diligence

dining

dinning

disappear

disappoint

disastrous

disciple

discipline

discrimination

discussion

dairy

disease

dealt

disgusted

debater

disillusioned

deceit

dissatisfied

dissipate

distribute

divided

divine

doctor

doesn’t

dominant

dormitories

drier

dropped

drunkenness

during

dyeing

dying

eager

earnest

easily

economics

ecstasy

effect

efficiency

efficient

eighth

eligible

eliminate

embarrass

eminent

emperor

emphasize

employee

encouraging

endeavor

enemy

engineer

enterprise

entertain

entertainment

enthusiastic

entirely

entrance

environment

equally

equip

equipment

equipped

equivalent

erroneous

escapade

escape

especially

etc.

everything

evidently

exaggerated

exceed

excel

excellence

except

exceptional

excitable

exercise

exhaust

exhilarate

existence

expected

expense

experience

explanation

extensive

extraordinary

extremely

extremity

fallacy

familiar

families

fantasies

fanatic

fascinate

fashions

favorite

February

fictitious

fiery

finally

financially

financier

foreign

foremost

foresee

forest

forfeit

formally

formerly

forth

forty

forward

fourth

frantically

fraternities

freshman

friendliness

frightened

fulfill

fundamentally

furniture

further

gaiety

gauge

genealogy

generally

genius

government

governor

grammar

grammatically

grandeur

greasing

grievous

guaranteed

guard

guest

guidance

guttural

handkerchief

handled

happened

happiness

harass

haven’t

having

hear

height

here

heroes

heroic

heroine

hesitancy

hindrance

holy

hoping

horde

hospitalization

huge

humorist

humorous

hundred

hungrily

hurries

hygiene

hypocrisy

hypocrite

ideally

ignorance

illiterate

illusion

imaginary

imagination

imagine

imitative

immaculate

immediately

immense

importance

impromptu

inadvertent

incidentally

increase

incredible

indefinitely

independence

indispensable

individually

industries

inevitable

influence

influential

ingenious

ingenuous

ingredient

inimitable

initiative

innocent

instance

intellectual

intelligence

intentionally

intercede

interested

interfere

interference

interpretation

interrupt

involve

irrelevant

irresistible

irritable

isn’t

its

it’s

jealousy

knowledge

laboratory

laborer

laboriously

laid

later

latter

lavender

lead

led

legitimate

leisurely

lengthening

liable

library

license

lightning

likelihood

likely

listener

literary

literature

liveliest

livelihood

loneliness

loose

lose

luxury

magazine

magnificence

maintain

maintenance

management

maneuver

manual

manufacturers

marriage

material

mathematics

mattress

meant

mechanics

medical

medicine

medieval

melancholy

methods

militarism

millennium

millionaire

mineralogy

miniature

minute

miscellaneous

mischief

mischievous

Mississippi

misspelled

modifier

momentous

moral

morale

morally

mosquitoes

motor

murmur

muscle

mutilate

mysterious

naive

narrative

naturally

necessary

necessity

Negroes

neither

nervous

nevertheless

nickel

niece

nineteenth

ninetieth

ninety

ninth

noble

noticeable

noticing

nowadays

nuisance

numerous

numskull

obedience

oblige

obstacle

occasion

occasionally

occur

occurred

occurrence

officer

official

omission

omit

omitted

oneself

onion

operate

opinion

opponent

opportunity

oppose

opposite

optimism

optimistic

ordered

organization

original

outrageous

overrun

pageant

paid

pamphlets

paraffin

parallel

paralyzed

parenthesis

parliament

participial

participle

particularly

partner

passed

past

pastime

peace

peaceable

peculiar

perceive

perform

performance

perhaps

permanent

permissible

permit

perseverance

persistent

personal

personnel

perspiration

persuade

pertain

phase

phenomenon

Philippines

philosophy

phrase

physical

physically

picnic

picnicking

picture

piece

pigeon

planned

plausible

playwright

pleasant

plebeian

poison

politician

political

politics

possession

possible

potatoes

practically

practice

prairie

precede

precedence

precedents

precious

predictable

predominant

prefer

preference

preferred

prejudice

preparation

presence

prestige

prevalent

primitive

principal

principle

prisoners

privilege

probably

procedure

proceed

profession

professor

prominent

propaganda

propagate

propeller

prophecy

prophesy

protuberant

psychoanalysis

psychology

psychopathic

psychosomatic

pursue

putting

quantity

quarter

questionnaire

quiet

quite

quizzes

raised

realize

really

rebel

recede

receipt

receive

receiving

recognize

recommend

reconnoiter

refer

reference

referred

referring

regard

reign

relative

relieve

religion

religious

remember

remembrance

reminisce

rendezvous

repetition

replies

represent

representative

resistance

resources

response

restaurant

revealed

rheumatism

rhythm

ridicule

ridiculous

roommate

sacrifice

sacrilege

sacrilegious

safety

sandwich

satire

satisfied

satisfy

sauerkraut

scarcely

scene

scent

schedule

science

scintillate

secede

secretary

seized

sense

sentence

sentinel

separate

separation

sergeant

service

several

severely

shepherd

shining

shipyard

shone

shown

shriek

siege

sieve

significance

similar

simile

simply

simultaneous

since

sincerely

skillful

sleight

slight

slippery

society

sociology

soliloquy

sometimes

sophomore

source

souvenir

speaking

specimen

speech

sponsor

stabilization

statement

stationary

stationery

statistics

statue

stature

statute

stepped

stopping

stops

stories

straight

strategy

strength

strengthen

strenuous

stretch

strict

struggle

stubborn

studying

stupefy

subordinate

substantial

subtle

succeed

successful

succession

sufficient

suffrage

summary

summed

sunrise

superintendent

supersede

suppose

suppress

sure

surprise

surrounding

susceptible

suspense

suspicious

swimming

syllable

symbol

symmetrical

symmetry

synonym

synonymous

tariff

tasting

technique

temperament

temperature

temporary

tenant

tendency

tenet

than

their

themselves

theories

theory

there

thereabouts

therefor

therefore

they’re

thorough

those

thought

threshold

threw

through

throughout

tired

to, too, two

together

tomorrow

tournament

toward

track

tract

tragedy

transferred

translate

tremendous

tried

truly

Tuesday

typical

tyrannical

tyranny

tyrant

unanimous

unconscious

undoubtedly

unique

unnecessary

until

unusually

useful

using

usually

vacuum

valuable

varies

various

vegetable

vegetation

vengeance

vicious

victorious

view

village

villain

visitor

violoncello

volunteer

warrant

warring

weak

weather

Wednesday

week

weird

welfare

wherever

whether

which

whither

whole

wholly

who’s, whose

woman (women)

wonderful

won’t

woolly

write

writing

written

yacht

yield

your, you’re

SPELLING RULES

Although the fifteen spelling rules that follow are generalized—and do have exceptions—they will prove very helpful to your child in learning to spell words correctly.

Rule 1

The plural of most nouns is formed by adding s to the singular; e.g., cat, cats.

Rule 2

When the noun ends in s, x, sh, and ch, the plural is generally formed by adding es; e.g., buses; foxes, bushes, benches.

Rule 3

The plural of a noun ending in y preceded by a consonant is formed by changing the y to i and adding es; e.g., body, bodies Words ending in y following a vowel do not change y to i; e.g., boy, boys.

Rule 4

The plural of a few nouns is made by changing its form; e.g., woman, women; mouse, mice; scarf, scarves.

Rule 5

An apostrophe is used to show the omission of a letter or letters in a contraction; e.g., aren’t, we’ll.

Rule 6

An abbreviation is always followed by a period; e.g., Mon., Feb., St.

Rule 7

The possessive of a singular noun is formed by adding an apostrophe and s; e.g., father, father’s.

The possessive of a plural noun ending in 5 is formed by adding an apostrophe; e.g., girls, girls’.

Rule 8

A word that ends in a silent e usually keeps the e when a suffix beginning with a consonant is added; e.g., nine, ninety; care, careful, careless.

Rule 9

A word that ends in a silent e usually drops the e when a suffix beginning with a vowel is added; e.g., breeze, breezes; live, living; move, movable; chose, chosen.

Rule 10

A one-syllable word that ends in one consonant following a short vowel usually doubles the consonant before a suffix that begins with a vowel; e.g., fat; fatter, fattest; big, bigger, biggest.

Rule 11

A word of more than one syllable that ends in one consonant following one short vowel usually doubles the final consonant before a suffix beginning with a vowel provided the accent is on the last syllable; e.g., commit, committed, committing; forget, forgetting

Rule 12

A word ending in y and following a consonant usually changes the y to i before a suffix unless the suffix begins with i; e.g., cry, cries, crying A word that ends in a y preceded by a vowel usually keeps the y when a suffix is added; e.g., buy, buys, buying

Rule 13

The letter q in a word is always followed by u.

Rule 14

The letter i is usually used before e except after c, or when sounded like a as in neighbor and weigh. Examples of exceptions to this rule are: neither, either, foreigner, weird, forfeit.

Rule 15

Proper nouns and adjectives formed from proper nouns should always begin with capital letters; e.g., America, American.

Punctuation and Capitalization

Have your child answer the following questions. Go over his or her answers and compare them with the answers given after the questions. Then show your child how to correct his or her mistakes. You may want to explain to your child the directions to the questions.

Directions: In the exercise below, four parts of each sentence are underlined. Choose the letter beneath that underlining where a punctuation or capitalization error occurs. If there are no punctuation or capitalization errors among the underlinings, mark the answer E.

EXAMPLES

1I want to study law for three Image (1) I like the Image (2) my Image is a lawyer; and Image my town needs more lawyers. Image Choice A is correct. You use a colon (:) when you are relating something to various items.

2This is Image recipe for good Image drink milk, eat Image quantities of Image and exercise every day. Image. Choice C is correct. You use a hyphen when two words are linked together: good-sized.

3George Bernard Image play, Image contains this memorable Image: “Lack of money is the root of all Image Image Choice A is correct. You are really saying the “play of Shaw,” so Shaws gets an apostrophe(’) after the w: Shaw’s.

4Last year a typical Image taxpayer paid the Image government $1,791 in income taxes, $1,103 in Image taxes, and $1,920 in indirect taxes such as excise taxes on liquor, gasoline, Image and air travel. Image Choice E is correct. There is no punctuation or capitalization error.

5Although Labor Image comes in Image my Image insists that every day is labor day for him. Image Choice A is correct. Labor Day is the name of the holiday, so day is also capitalized.

Now have your child answer the questions below. Check your child’s answers with those given in the book to see whether he or she has approached them correctly.

Directions: In these questions, four parts of each sentence are underlined. Choose the number of that underlining where a punctuation error or capitalization error occurs. If there are no punctuation or capitalization errors among the underlinings, fill in answer space E.

EXAMPLE

Image Joe went outside to play. Image

Here you would choose C because the underlined part lettered C is incorrect. There is no comma after the word "and."

EXAMPLE

Image you understand how to do Image Mr. Martin. Image

Here you would choose D because there is no error.

QUESTIONS

1We thought he would arrive at Image on Tuesday, but he Image come until Image at about three Image Image

2Image come home Image time for Image dinner. Image

3According to the missing person’s Image girl was about five Image of medium Image and wearing a blue and white top with tight blue jeans. Image

4I asked Bill, Jim, and Image to come with Image but they all Image Image thanks.” Image

5Visiting Image is not too Image it’s only about a ninety-minute drive from New York ImageImage

6Image often work hard studying Imageics, science, history, and foreign languages. Image

7Image I tell you Image wait for you on the east side of Image she yelled angrily. Image

8The Image handsome Image on the stage is my brother; Image the star of the show and Image most popular performer. Image

9If I’m not there on time Image Image be because Image have changed my mind about going to the Caribbean. Image

10“Bang on the Image advised the Image he will wake up ImageImage

ANSWER

1 (A)midnight

2 (B)now; or now. It’s

3 (A)report, the

4 (D)“No

5 (B)Mountain

6 (B)freshmen

7 (A)Didnt

8 (C)he’s

9 (E)No error

10 (D)(I hope).

Grammar and Correct Usage

Have your child answer the following questions. Go over his or her answers and compare them with the answers given after the questions. Then show your child how to correct his or her mistakes. You may want to explain to your child the directions to the questions.

Directions: In each of the questions below, you will find a sentence with four words (or phrases) underlined. In some sentences one of the underlined words (or phrases) is incorrect according to the rules of standard written English for grammar and correct usage. No sentence has more than one error. You are to assume that the rest of the sentence (whatever is not underlined) is correct. If you find an error, choose the letter of the underlined word (or phrase) that is incorrect. If you find no error, mark the answer E.

EXAMPLE

1Since oxygen is Image for human life, scientists Image the possibility Image oxygen for future inhabitants of Image stations. Image

Choice E is correct. There is no grammar or usage error.

2Image my opinion that Image the correct pronunciation of a word Image any attempt Image the correct spelling. Image Choice A is correct. This should read, “It’s my opinion ...”

A contraction is needed here. (It’s means It is.)

3If I Image more Image the person Image I was writing to, I would have written a Image answer. Image

Choice A is correct. This should read, “If I had known . . .”

The “if clause” of the past contrary-to-fact conditional statement requires the had known form—not the would have known form.

4If you Image Bill and Joe Image scholarship goes, you will have to conclude that Bill is, Image any question, the Image. Image

Choice D is correct. This should read, “. . . Bill is, without any question, the brighter.

When comparing two individuals, we use the comparative form (brighter)—not the superlative form (brightest).

5Image of how very Image Ellen Image in the art competition, she was Image from discouraged. Image

Choice B is correct. This should read, “In spite of how poorly . . .” The adverb (poorly)—not the adjective (poor)—must be used to modify the verb (had done).

Now have your child answer the questions below. Check your child’s answers with those given in the book to see whether he or she has approached them correctly.

Directions: In each of the following questions, you will find a sentence with four words (or phrases) underlined. In some sentences one of the underlined words (or phrases) is incorrect according to the rules of standard written English for grammar and correct usage. No sentence has more than one error. You are to assume that the rest of the sentence (whatever is not underlined) is correct. If you find an error, choose the letter of the underlined word (or phrase) that is incorrect. If you find no error, mark the answer E.

EXAMPLE

They Image to the party Image Image

Here you would choose A, because the underlined part lettered A is incorrect.

EXAMPLE

John and I Image very happy when we Image out Image scores Image the test. Image

Here you would choose E, because there is no error.

QUESTIONS

1The man Image temper is Image control at Image more Image to think clearly and to achieve success in his business and social relations. Image

2Whether nineteenth-century classics Image in school Image has become a Image of controversy for students and teachers Image Image

3Neither George Foreman Image millions Image believed that Muhammad Ali Image the heavyweight title by an Image knockout. Image

4Bob wanted to finish his homework Image before Image mother Image home from her Image house. Image

5Inflation together with the high interest rates and Image prices Image some Image economy very Image Image

6The Pirates Image the game against the Dodgers because Smith Image a home run with the bases Image and played Image in the outfield. Image

7The Watergate scandal Image a thing Image but the Republicans will feel Image for a long time to come. Image

8If we Image our vacation a day Image, we Image so much trouble Image a plane reservation. Image

9We’re Image that Chris Evert Lloyd and Tracy Austin are Image great tennis players, but Image to judge which one is the Image of the two? Image

10 All of the class Image but Jerry, Alice, and Image were Image ing to select the delegates for next Image convention. Image

ANSWERS

1(A)“The man whose temper is under control. . .”

The contraction (who’s meaning who is) is obviously incorrect here. We need the possessive pronoun-adjective whose to modify the noun (temper).

2(E)All underlined parts are correct.

3(A)“Neither George Foreman nor millions of others . . .” Neither must be paired with nor (not with or).

4(C)“. . . before his mother came home . . .”

The past perfect tense (had come) is used for a past action that occurs before another past action. The mother’s coming home did not occur before Bob wanted to finish his homework. Therefore, the past tense (came) should be used—not the past perfect tense (had come).

5(B)“Inflation together with the high interest rates and soaring prices is hurting . .

The subject of the sentence is inflation. This is a singular subject, so the verb must be singular—is hurting (not are hurting). The words rates and prices are not parts of the subject.

6(D). . played beautifully in the outfield.”

The adverb (beautifully)—not the adjective (beautiful)—must be used to modify the verb (played).

7(C)“. . . the Republicans will feel its effects . . .”

The possessive pronoun-adjective its does not have an apostrophe. There is another word it’s, which means it is.

8(A)“If we had begun our vacation . . .”

The past perfect tense of to begin is had begun—not had began.

9(D). . which one is the better of the two?”

In comparing two persons or things, we use the comparative degree (better)—not the superlative degree (best).

10 (B) “All of the class presidents but Jerry, Alice, and me . . .”

The preposition (but) must take an object form (me)— not a subject form (I).

Choosing tile Right Word

The difference between the right word and the almost-right word is the difference between lightning and the lightning bug (firefly).

—Mark Twain

Here is a list of words that are commonly misused. You may want to look through the list yourself and then explain some of the misuses to your child. It should be kept as a reference so that you can check from time to time to see whether your child is misusing a word.

A, AN. The indefinite article a is used before a consonant sound; the indefinite article an is used before a vowel sound. Say a plan, an idea.

ACCEPT, EXCEPT. Accept means to receive; except when used as a verb means to leave out. (We accepted the gift. Pedro’s name was excepted from the honor roll.) The word except is used most often as a preposition. Everyone went except me.

AFFECT, EFFECT. Affect is a verb that means to influence (Winning the sweepstakes will affect his attitude.) Effect, as a noun, means an influence. (Smoking has an effect on one’s health.) Effect, as a verb, means to bring about. (The teacher’s praise effected a change in the student.)

Affected, as an adjective, has the meaning of false. (She had an affected way of speaking.)

AGGRAVATE, IRRITATE. Aggravate means to make worse. (Drinking ice water will aggravate your cold.) Irritate means to annoy or exasperate. (Mary’s continuous chattering irritated me.)

AIN’T. Do not use this expression.

ALREADY, ALL READY. Already means before or by a certain time. (Mike said that he had already done the job.) All ready means completely ready. (When the buzzer sounded, the horses were all ready to start running.)

ALL RIGHT, ALRIGHT. The only correct spelling is all right.

ALTOGETHER, ALL TOGETHER. Altogether means entirely, wholly. (Jane is altogether too conceited to get along with people.) All together means as a group. (After the explosion, the boss was relieved to find his workers all together in front of the building.)

AMONG, BETWEEN. Among is used with more than two persons or things. (The manager distributed the gifts among all of the employees.) Between is used only with two persons or things. (The steak was divided between the two children.)

AMOUNT, NUMBER. Amount is used to refer to things in bulk. (The war costs a great amount of money.) Number is used to refer to things that can be counted. (A large number of pupils attend this school.)

AND ETC. This is incorrect. The abbreviation etc. stands for the Latin et cetera The et means and; the cetera means other things. It is wrong to say and etc. because the idea of and is already included in the etc

ANYWAYS, ANYWHERES, EVERYWHERES, SOMEWHERES. These expressions are not correct. Omit the final s after each.

AS, LIKE. As, used as a conjunction, is followed by a verb. (Please do it as I told you to.) Like may not be used as a conjunction. If it is used as a preposition, it is not followed by a verb. (This ice cream looks like custard.)

AWFUL. See TERRIFIC, TERRIBLE.

BEING THAT. Being that is incorrect when used to mean since or because. (Since you are tired, you ought to rest.)

BESIDE, BESIDES. Beside means alongside of; besides means in addition to. (Nixon sat beside Autry at the baseball game.) There is nobody besides her husband who understands Ann.)

BETWEEN. See AMONG.

BRING, TAKE. Consider the speaker as a starting point. Bring is used for something carried in the direction of the speaker. (When you return from lunch, please bring me a ham sandwich.) Take rs used for something carried away from the speaker. (If you are going downtown, please take this letter to the post office.)

BUNCH. Bunch means cluster. Do no use bunch for group or crowd. (This is a large bunch of grapes.) (A crowd of people were at the scene of the accident.)

BUT THAT, BUT WHAT. Do not use these expressions in place of that in structures like the following: I do not question that (not but that) you are richer than I am.

CAN’T HARDLY. Don’t use this double negative. Say can hardly.

CONTINUAL, CONTINUOUS. Continual means happening at intervals. (Salesmen are continually walking into this office.) Continuous means going on without interruption. (Without a moment of dry weather, it rained continuously for forty days and forty nights.)

COULD OF. Do not use for could have.

DATA. Although data is the plural of datum, idiom permits the use of this word as a singular. Some authorities still insist on Data are gathered rather than Data is gathered or these data rather than this data Most persons in computer programming now say Data is gathered or this data

DEAL. Do not use this term for arrangement or transaction. (He has an excellent arrangement (not deal) with the manager.)

DIFFERENT FROM, DIFFERENT THAN. Different from is correct. Different than is incorrect. (His method of doing this is different from mine.)

DISCOVER, INVENT. Discover means to see or learn something that has not been previously known. (They say the Vikings, not Columbus, discovered America.) Invent means to create for the first time. (William S. Burroughs invented the adding machine.)

DISINTERESTED, UNINTERESTED. Disinterested means without bias. (An umpire must be disinterested to judge fairly in a baseball game.) Uninterested means not caring about a situation. (I am totally uninterested in your plan.)

DOESN’T, DON’T. Doesn’t means does not; don’t means do not. Do not say He don’t (do not) when you mean He doesn’t (does not).

DUE TO. At the beginning of a sentence, due to is always incorrect. Use, instead, on account of because of or a similar expression. (On account of bad weather, the contest was postponed.) As a predicate adjective construction, due to is correct. His weakness was due to his hunger.

EACH OTHER, ONE ANOTHER. Each other is used for two persons. (The executive and his secretary antagonize each other.) One another is used for more than two persons. The members of the large family love one another.)

EFFECT. See AFFECT.

ENTHUSE. Do not use this word. Say enthusiastic. (The art critic was enthusiastic about the painting.)

EQUALLY AS GOOD. This expression is incorrect. Say, instead, just as good (This car is just as good as that.)

FARTHER, FURTHER. Farther is used for a distance that is measurable. (The farmer’s house is about 100 yards farther down the road.) Further is used to express the extension of an idea. (A further explanation may be necessary.)

FEWER, LESS. Fewer applies to what may be counted. (Greenwich Village has fewer conservatives than liberals.) Less refers to degree or amount. (Less rain fell this month than the month before.)

FLOUT, FLAUNT. Flout means to mock or insult. (The king flouted the wise man when the latter offered advice.) Flaunt means to make a pretentious display of. (The upstart flaunted his diamond ring.)

FURTHER. See FARTHER.

GET. Get means to obtain or receive. Get should not be used in the sense of to excite, to interest, or to understand Say: His guitar playing fascinates (not gets) me. Say: When you talk about lifestyles, I just don’t understand (not get) you.

GOOD, WELL. Do not use the adjective good in place of the adverb well in structures like the following: John works well (not good) in the kitchen. Jim Palmer pitched well (not good) in last night’s game.

GRADUATE. One graduates from, or is graduated from, a school. One does not graduate a school. (The student graduated [or was graduated] from high school.)

HAD OF. Avoid using this to mean had Say: My father always said that he wished he had (not had of) gone to college.

HANGED, HUNG. When a person is executed, he is hanged When anything is suspended in space, it is hung

HARDLY. See CAN’T HARDLY.

HEALTHFUL, HEALTHY. Healthful applies to conditions that promote health. Healthy applies to a state of health. Say: Stevenson found the climate of Saranac Lakes very healthful. Say: Mary is a very healthy girl.

IF, WHETHER. Use whether—not if—in structures that follow verbs like ask, doubt, know, learn, say. Say: Hank Aaron didn’t know whether (not if) he was going to break Babe Ruth’s homerun record.

IMPLY, INFER. The speaker implies when he suggests or hints at. (The owner of the store implied that the patron stole a box of toothpicks.) The listener infers when he draws a conclusion from facts or evidence. (From what you say, I infer that I am about to be discharged.)

IN, INTO. In is used to express a location, without the involvement of motion. (The sugar is in the cupboard.) Into is used to express motion from one place to another. (The housekeeper put the sugar into the cupboard.)

IN REGARDS TO. This is incorrect. Say in regard to or with regard to.

INVENT. See DISCOVER.

IRREGARDLESS. Do not use irregardless. It is incorrect for regardless. (You will not be able to go out tonight regardless of the fact that you have done all of your homework.)

ITS, IT’S. Its is the possessive of it; it’s is the contraction for it is.

KIND OF, SORT OF. Do not use these expressions as adverbs. Say: Ali was quite (not kind of or sort of) witty in his post-fight interview.

KIND OF A, SORT OF A. Omit the a. Say: What kind of (not kind of a or sort of a) game is lacrosse?

LEARN, TEACH. Learn means gaining knowledge. Teach means imparting knowledge. Say: He taught (not learned) his brother how to swim.

LEAVE, LET. The word leave means to depart. (I leave today for San Francisco.) The word let means to allow. (Let me take your place.)

LESS, FEWER. See FEWER, LESS.

LIABLE, LIKELY. Liable means exposed to something unpleasant. (If you speed, you are liable to get a summons.) Likely means probable, with reference to either a pleasant or unpleasant happening. (It is likely to snow tomorrow.)

LOCATE. Do not use locate to mean settle or move to. Say: We will move to (not locate in) Florida next year.

MIGHT OF, MUST OF. Omit the of. We might have or must have.

MYSELF, HIMSELF, YOURSELF. These pronouns are to be used as intensives. (The chairman himself will open the meeting.) Do not use these pronouns when me, him, or you will serve. Say: We shall be happy if Joe and you (not yourself) join us for lunch at the Plaza.

NICE. See TERRIFIC, TERRIBLE.

NUMBER, AMOUNT. See AMOUNT, NUMBER.

OF, HAVE. Do not use of for have in structures like could have.

OFF OF. Omit the of Say: The book fell off (not off of) the shelf.

POUR, SPILL. When one pours, he does it deliberately. (He carefully poured the wine into her glass.) When one spills, he does it accidentally. (I carelessly spilled some wine on her dress.)

PRACTICAL, PRACTICABLE. Practical means fitted for actual work Practicable means feasible or possible. Say: My business partner is a practical man. Say: The boss did not consider the plan practicable for this coming year.

PRINCIPAL, PRINCIPLE. Principal applies to a chief or the chief part of something. Principle applies to a basic law. Say: Mr. Jones is the principal of the school. Professor White was the principal speaker. Honesty is a good principle to follow.

REASON IS BECAUSE. Do not use the expression reason is because—it is always incorrect. Say the reason is that. (The reason Jack failed the course is that he didn’t study.)

REGARDLESS. See IRREGARDLESS.

RESPECTFULLY, RESPECTIVELY. Respectfully means with respect as in the complimentary close of a letter, respectfully yours. Respectively means that each item will be considered in the order given. Say: This paper is respectfully submitted. Say: The hero, the heroine, and the villain will be played by Albert, Joan, and Harry respectively.

SAID. Avoid such legalistic uses of said as said letter, said plan, said program except in legal writing.

SHOULD OF. Do not use to mean should have.

SOME. Do not use some when you mean somewhat. Say: I’m somewhat confused (not some).

SPILL, POUR. See POUR, SPILL.

SUSPICION. Do not use suspicion as a verb when you mean suspect.

TAKE, BRING. See BRING, TAKE.

TEACH, LEARN. See LEARN, TEACH.

TERRIFIC, TERRIBLE. Avoid “lazy words.” Many people don’t want to take the trouble to use the exact word. They will use words like terrific, swell, great, beautiful, etc. to describe anything and everything that is favorable. And they will use words like terrible, awful, lousy, miserable, etc. for whatever is unfavorable. Use the exact word. Say: We had a delicious (not terrific) meal. Say: We had a boring (not terrible) weekend.

THIS KIND, THESE KIND. This kind is correct—as is that kind, these kinds, and those kinds (My little brother likes this kind of pears.) These kind and those kind are incorrect.

TRY AND. Do not say try and Say try to. (Try to visit me while I am in Florida.)

UNINTERESTED. See DISINTERESTED.

WAIT FOR, WAIT ON. Wait for means to await; wait on means to serve. Say: I am waiting for (not on) Carter to call me on the telephone.

WAY, WAYS. Do not use ways for way. Say: It is a long way (not ways) to Japan.

WHERE. Do not use where in place of that in expressions like the following: I see in the newspaper that (not where) a nuclear reactor may be built a mile away from our house.

WOULD OF. Do not use to mean would have.

Diction Stile, and Sentence Structure

Have your child answer the following questions. Go over his or her answers and compare them with the answers given after the questions. Then show your child how to correct his or her mistakes. You may want to explain to your child the directions to the questions.

Directions: In the exercise below, each sentence is partly or wholly underlined. In some cases, what is underlined is correct; in other cases, it is incorrect. The five choices that follow each sentence represent various ways of writing the underlined part. Choice A is the same as the original underlining, but Choices B, C, D, and E are different. If, in your judgment, the original sentence is better than any of the changed sentences, select Choice A. If another choice produces the only correct sentence, select that choice.

In making your selections, you should observe the rules of standard written English. Your choice must fulfill the requirements of correct grammar, diction (word choice), sentence structure, and style.

If a choice changes the meaning of the original sentence, do not make that choice.

EXAMPLES

1He likes to sit in the plaza at the base of the monument, listen to the variety of languages being spoken, and eavesdrop on conversation tidbits.

(A)He likes to sit in the plaza at the base of the monument, listen to the variety of languages being spoken, and eavesdrop on conversation tidbits.

(B)He likes to sit in the plaza at the base of the monument, listening to the variety of languages being spoken, and eavesdrop on conversation tidbits.

(C)Sitting in the plaza at the base of the monument, listening to the variety of languages being spoken, and eavesdropping on conversation tidbits are his favorites.

(D)He likes to sit in the plaza at the base of the monument, listen to the variety of languages being spoken, while eavesdropping on conversation tidbits.

(E)As he eavesdrops on conversation tidbits and listens to the kinds of languages being spoken, he likes to sit in the plaza at the base of the monument.

Choice A is correct. Choices B and D are incorrect because they alter the parallel structure of the sentence. Choice C is incorrect because the word favorites is too vague. Choice E is incorrect because the focus of the sentence and the order of activities are changed by the use of the subordinating conjunction as

2The approximate number of 6 percent of all those executives who work in major corporations lose their jobs each year.

(A)The approximate number of 6 percent of all those executives who work in major corporations lose their jobs each year.

(B)The number of executives working who lose their jobs each year in major corporations approaches 6 percent.

(C)About 6 percent of all executives in major corporations lose their jobs each year.

(D)Major corporations executives who lose their jobs each year total approximately 6 percent of all of them.

(E)About 6 percent of executives lose their jobs each year if they work in major corporations.

Choice A is incorrect because it is wordy. Choice B is incorrect because it contains a misplaced modifier, in major corporations, and is thus unclear. Choice C is correct. Choice D is incorrect because it is wordy and indirect. Choice E is incorrect because it changes the original meaning of the sentence.

3Some people call the 1970s an era preoccupied with the past because of the revival of interest in the tunes and themes of former years.

(A)preoccupied with the past

(B)of past preoccupation

(C)devoted to unearthing a history of past eras

(D)of spending time on the past

(E)absorbed in the past

Choice A is correct. Choice B is incorrect because it is vague. Choice C is incorrect because it is too wordy. Choice D is incorrect because it is awkward. Choice E is incorrect because absorbed is an inappropriate word choice. The rest of the sentence does not bear out the claim of absorption.

4Block associations in the nation’s cities have multiplied recently, activities range from volunteer crime patrols to street festivals.

(A)activities range

(B)although activities range

(C)activities which range

(D)with activities ranging

(E)they sponsor activities ranging

Choices A and E are incorrect because they create run-on sentences. Choice B is incorrect because it contains an inappropriate subordinating conjunction, although, which makes the activities seem to be a drawback rather than a positive achievement. Choice C is incorrect because in the clause after the comma, the word activities is left hanging. Choice D is correct.

5For many people the present is uninviting although the future is uncertain.

(A)although

(B)and they also believe that

(C)which makes it likely that

(D)therefore

(E)and

Choice A contains an incorrect use of the subordinating conjunction although because the second clause does not have a conditional relationship to the first clause. It is independent of the first clause. Choice B is incorrect because it is wordy. Choice C is incorrect because it states a conclusion in the second clause that has no basis. Choice D is incorrect because it creates a run-on sentence. Choice E is correct.

Now have your child answer the questions below. Check your child’s answers with those given in the book to see whether he or she has approached them correctly.

Directions: Each sentence is partly or wholly underlined. In some cases, what is underlined is correct; in other cases, it is incorrect. The five choices that follow each sentence represent various ways of writing the underlined part. Choice A is the same as the original underlining, but Choices B, C, D, and E are different. If, in your judgment, the original sentence is better than any of the changed sentences, select Choice A. If another choice produces the only correct sentence, select that choice.

In making your selections, you should observe the rules of standard written English. Your choices must fulfill the requirements of correct grammar, diction (word choice), sentence structure, and style.

If a choice changes the meaning of the original sentence, do not make that choice.

QUESTIONS

1The police chief refused to say about what he would speak at next week’s news conference.

(A)about what he would speak

(B)the topic of his talk

(C)what he would discuss

(D)his topic of conversation

(E)the subject of his speech

2Because of a lack of space, speech teachers must work with students sitting in the hallways.

(A)work with students sitting in the hallways

(B)work with students as they sit in the hallways

(C)work with students while sitting in the hallways

(D)work in the hallways while sitting with students

(E)sit in the hallways while working with students

3The chairman postponed the meeting for another week, hoping that emotions would have time to settle in the interim.

(A)would have time to settle in the interim

(B)would in the interim have time to settle

(C)having time would settle in the interim

(D)in the interim would have time to settle

(E)would settle in the interim having time

4The day of dependence on robots to take over household chores is still far in the future.

(A)of dependence on robots

(B)of robot dependence

(C)when it may be possible for reliance on robots

(D)which is likely for depending on robots

(E)when you can depend on robots

5More than performing routine tasks herself, Marion also supervised other workers.

(A)More than

(B)Besides

(C)As an addition to

(D)Although

(E)Since

ANSWERS

1(C)Choices A, B, D, and E are incorrect because they are inappropriate and awkward phrases following the infinitive to say. Choice C is correct.

2(E)Choices A, B, and C are incorrect because it is not clear whether students or teachers are sitting in the hallways. Choice D is incorrect because its structure makes the meaning of the sentence unclear. Choice E is correct because the role of teachers is made clear by the proper arrangement of clauses.

3(A)Choice A is correct. Choices B and D are incorrect because the phrase in the interim is misplaced. It should follow the infinitive to settle. Choices C and E are incorrect because of the awkward use of the participle having.

4(E)Choice A is incorrect because it is too indefinite. Choice B is incorrect because it changes the meaning of the original sentence by using the noun robot as an adjective modifying dependence. Choices C and D are incorrect because they are wordy and indefinite. Choice E is correct.

5(B)Choices A and C are incorrect because they are inappropri ate phrases. Choice B is correct. Choices D and E are incorrect because they change the meaning of the introductory gerund phrase, and thus make the main clause seem illogical.

Logic and Organization

Have your child answer the following questions. Go over his or her answers and compare them with the answers given after the questions. Then show your child how to correct his or her mistakes. You may want to explain to your child the directions to the questions.

Directions: A paragraph, with superscript numerals to indicate the order of each sentence in the paragraph is presented below. You are to answer the questions that follow the paragraph. There are several such paragraphs and question sets in this part of the test.

11 know plenty of pet owners who suffer frustration every spring from fleas. 2 It is infuriating to be beaten by enemies so tiny, but in this eternal war the humans are often the losers. 3 Even our most powerful weapons can either prove ineffective or backfire, hurting the animals we try to protect. 4 Many people do not realize how harmful they can be. 5 They can kill baby kittens or even puppies by causing anemia, they can strip an animal of its hair, and they make life unbearable for infested animals, particularly thost allergic to their bites. 6 Kittens and puppies under two months can get sick or die if treated with a flea dust or spray, or by nursing from a mother exposed to any kind of flea repellent, including collars. 7 Longhaired cats can’t wear flea collars, because they usually develop severe irritations around their necks. 8 A surprising number of animals are allergic to flea deterrents. 9 One of the big problems with flea control is that the control can be more dangerous than the fleas.

EXAMPLE

1In sentence 2, but should be

(A)left as it is

(B)changed to so

(C)omitted

(D)changed to and

(E)changed to but often

Choice A is correct. The conjunction but is correctly used to introduce a fact that is the opposite of what one would want. Choice B is incorrect because so would mean that a conclusion follows, which is not the case in this sentence. Choice C is incorrect because leaving out but would result in a run-on sentence, clearly lacking a joining word like but. Choice D is incorrect because the sentence would lack the ironic force of showing that a human being can be outclassed by a flea. Choice E is incorrect because of the unnecessary repetition of the adverb often.

2Sentence 9 should be

(A)left as it is

(B)placed after sentence 5

(C)omitted

(D)placed after sentence 7

(E)joined to sentence 8 with and

Choice A is incorrect because sentence 9 contains a general idea that should clearly precede sentences 6, 7, and 8. Choice B is the correct placement for sentence 9, which is a broad statement and should appear before the examples listed in sentences 6, 7, and 8. Choice C is incorrect because the idea in sentence 9 is necessary as a bridge between sentences 4 and 5, which talk about the dangerous nature of fleas, and sentences 6, 7, and 8, which deal with the effects of flea control on dogs and cats. Choice D is incorrect because placing sentence 9 here would destroy the logical nature of the selection since the idea, expressed in sentence 9 has already been elaborated on in sentences 6 and 7. Choice E is incorrect because sentence 9 clearly introduces the ideas in sentences 6, 7, and 8. It could not serve as the second half of a concluding sentence. 4 as close as possible to the word it describes, which is develop. Otherwise, the meaning is not clear. Choice E is incorrect because there is no comparison in the sentence and therefore no need to use the form most usually.

3In sentence 7, usually should be

(A)left as it is

(B)changed to infrequently

(C)changed to every once in a while

(D)placed at the end of the sentence, after the word necks

(E)changed to most usually

Choice A is correct. Choice B is incorrect because infrequently means seldom, which is not the meaning of the sentence. Choice C is incorrect because it, too, is opposite in meaning to the idea of the sentence. It is also an awkward phrase as used in this sentence. Choice D is incorrect because the adverb usually should be placed as close as possible to the word it describes, which is develop. Otherwise, the meaning is not clear. Choice E is incorrect because there is no comparison in the sentence and therefore no need to use the form most usually.

4In sentence 4, they should be

(A)left as it is

(B)changed to people

(C)changed to weapons

(D)changed to fleas

(E)changed to animals

Choice A is incorrect because the pronoun they is unclear regarding the word it represents. It could refer to people, weapons, animals, or fleas. Choices B, C, and E are incorrect because the intention of the passage is to show that fleas are harmful, not people, weapons, or animals. Choice D is correct and avoids ambiguity (an unclear meaning).

5Sentence 5 should be

(A)made into two sentences by placing a period after hair

(B)changed by placing the conjunction and before the second clause, which would then begin “and they can strip an animal....”

(C)shortened by eliminating the last section beginning with particularly

(D)changed by adding the words which are after the pronoun those in the last part

(E)left as it is

Choice E is correct. Choice A is incorrect because placing a period after hair would transform the first two clauses into a run-on sentence. Choice B is incorrect because adding and ruins the rhythm of the original sentence. Whenever a series of words, phrases, or clauses is used, the conjunction is usually placed only before the last item or section of the series, not before each part of the series. Choice C is incorrect because leaving out the last phrase would omit a piece of information that is important in understanding the damaging effect that fleas can have on animals that are allergic to their bite. Choice D is incorrect because adding the words which are after the word those is unnecessary.

Now have your child answer the questions below. Check your child’s answers with those given in the book to see whether he or she has approached them correctly.

Directions: A paragraph, with superscript numerals to indicate the order of each sentence in the paragraph, is presented below. You are to answer the questions that follow the paragraph. There are several such paragraphs and question sets in this part of the test.

1 Most doctors across the country are probably not yet questioning patients about what kind of light they live under every day, some doctors are coming to believe that this query may be an entirely relevant one. 2 Unfortunately, the artificial light most of us live under is vastly inferior to the natural variety, so the theory goes, and we may be as starved for certain constituents of full-spectrum light as we are for the nutrients and vitamins taken out of refined foods. 3 Light, they contend, is a nutrient just as much as water or food, and is absorbed by our bodies and used in a variety of metabolic processes. 4 Studies done in schools around the country showed that children who spent a year in classrooms that had full-spectrum rather than cool-white fluorescent light were less hyperactive, had better grades, and grew faster. 5 In another study it was found that children who spent their days under cool-white light developed significantly more cavities than those working under light that had low levels of ultraviolet added to it. 6 Zoos have been finding that pit vipers, which have long preferred to starve rather than eat in captivity, were accepting food within a few number of days after sunlight-simulating lamps containing ultraviolet were installed.

QUESTIONS

1Sentence 1 would be correct if it were to begin with

(A)Because

(B)In general

(C)Considering

(D)Though

(E)It is safe to say that

2Sentence 3 is best placed

(A)at the beginning of the passage

(B)after sentence 1

(C)where it is now

(D)after sentence 4

(E)after sentence 5

3Were the passage to be divided into three paragraphs, the second paragraph should begin with

(A)sentence 2

(B)sentence 3

(C)sentence 4

(D)sentence 5

(E)sentence 6

4In sentence 6 the phrase within a few number of days should

(A)remain the same

(B)have within changed to after

(C)be reduced to a few days

(D)be replaced by shortly

(E)be replaced by not long

ANSWERS

1(D)Choices A and C are incorrect because they imply a cause/effect relationship not indicated by the remainder of the sentence. Choices B and E create run-on sentences. Choice D is correct because it establishes the correct relationship in both structure and meaning.

2(B)Choice A leaves the meaning of the sentence unclear be cause there is no preceding noun to which they can refer. Choice B is correct because they clearly refers to the doctors who think sunlight is important for health, and because the sentence provides a transition to sentence 2. Choice C is incorrect because the referent of they is unclear. Choice D is incorrect because the logical flow from sentence 4 to sentence 5 is interrupted. Choice E is incorrect because grammatically they would refer to children in sentence 5; the meaning of the sentences, however, makes this reference impossible.

3(C)Choices A and B are incorrect because sentences 2 and 3 are part of the general introduction. Choice C is correct because sentence 4 is the beginning of a separate topic giving specific information about how some artificial light is harmful. Choice D is incorrect because sentence 5 gives information similar to that of sentence 5 and therefore belongs in the same paragraph. Choice E is incorrect because sentence 6 is the second break in the passage; consequently, it could be the beginning of the third paragraph.

4(C)Choice A is incorrect because a few number of days is needlessly wordy. Choice B is incorrect because the phrase still remains unwieldy. Choice C is correct because the meaning is conveyed clearly and concisely. Choices D and E are incorrect because they are too vague: They could refer to several minutes, several hours, or several days.