Straighten out the logical connections - Untangle mixed constructions - Clarity

Rules for writers, Tenth edition - Diana Hacker, Nancy Sommers 2021

Straighten out the logical connections
Untangle mixed constructions
Clarity

A subject and its verb should make sense together; when they don’t, the error is known as faulty predication.

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An appositive is a noun that renames a nearby noun. When an appositive and the noun it renames are not logically equivalent, the error is known as faulty apposition. (See 49c.)

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