Rules for writers, Tenth edition - Diana Hacker, Nancy Sommers 2021
Simplify the structure
Tighten wordy sentences
Clarity
Simplifying sentences and using stronger verbs can make writing more direct.

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The colorless verbs is, are, was, and were often generate excess words.

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The expletive constructions there is and there are (or there was and there were) can also lead to wordy sentences. The same is true of expletive constructions beginning with it.

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