The Kaplan Methods for Writing & Language and infographics - Writing & Language:expression of ideas - Writing

PSAT/NMSQT Prep 2019 - Princeton Review 2019

The Kaplan Methods for Writing & Language and infographics
Writing & Language:expression of ideas
Writing

CHAPTER OBJECTIVES

By the end of this chapter, you will be able to:

1. Distinguish among the three different Writing & Language text types

2. Identify issues in a passage and select the correct answer by applying the Kaplan Method for Writing & Language

3. Identify and analyze quantitative information and infographics

4. Synthesize information from infographics and text

SMARTPOINTS

Point Value

SmartPoint Category

Point Builder

The Kaplan Method for Writing & Language

Point Builder

The Kaplan Method for Infographics

10 Points

Quantitative

Prepare

OVERVIEW OF THE WRITING & LANGUAGE PASSAGE TYPES

You will see four Writing & Language passages on Test Day, each of which will have 11 questions. Recognizing the text type of a Writing & Language passage helps you focus on the questions as they relate to the passage’s general purpose. Knowing the overarching aim of the passage will help you answer questions more efficiently and accurately.

Writing & Language Passage Types

1—2 Argumentative texts

Author will advocate a point, idea, or proposal.

1—2 Informative/Explanatory texts

Author will explain, describe, or analyze a topic in order to impart information without necessarily advocating.

1 Nonfiction Narrative text

Author will use a story-like approach to convey information or ideas.

Remember

The PSAT rewards critical thinking in context. Pay attention to the text type to answer Writing & Language questions more efficiently.

Let’s look at three short Writing & Language passage excerpts (without errors) and see how a PSAT expert identifies the text type of each. The left column features the passage excerpt, while the right column demonstrates the strategic thinking a test expert employs when identifying Writing & Language text types.

Passages

Strategic Thinking

It has long been believed that the best system of government is one in which everyone in a given society would vote on each and every law. Such a system of referendum would prevent corrupt politicians from serving their own self-interests when voting on a law. In the past, such a system could only be considered for small communities, as it would be impossible to execute efficiently on a large scale. However, the existence of modern technology renders this objection moot. If our society so desires it, all of us may one day cast votes on individual laws from the comfort of our homes.

What does the opening phrase “It has long been believed” suggest? The author might be challenging a belief or advocating something against that belief.

What does the word “however” indicate? A change in direction in the passage.

What is the author advocating? Voting from home.

Which text type is this? Argumentative.

Some psychologists believe that humans have developed special nervous systems capable of recognizing subtle expressions out of necessity, due to the weight of such recognition in human communication. To test this theory, researchers showed photographs of people displaying emotions of joy, anger, and surprise to a group of trained pigeons. The birds were not only able to distinguish between expressions but were also able to match each correctly to the same expression displayed by photographs with different faces. While the experiment’s results do not conclusively prove that the pigeons can comprehend the meaning of the tested expressions, it does cast doubt upon the theory proposed by the psychologists.

What does the introductory phrase “Some psychologists believe” indicate? That the author is reporting on a behavior or phenomenon.

What other phrases indicate this “reporting” approach? “To test this theory, researchers . . . ” and “While the experiment’s results . . .”

What is the author describing in this passage? A theory of expression recognition.

Which text type is this? Informative/Explanatory.

When studying ancient history in this university many years ago, I had as a special subject “Greece in the Period of the Persian Wars.” I collected 15 or 20 volumes on my shelves and took it for granted that there, recorded in these volumes, I had all the facts relating to my subject. Let us assume—it was very nearly true—that those volumes contained all the facts about it that were then known or could be known. It never occurred to me to inquire by what accident or process of attrition that minute selection of facts, out of all the myriad facts that must have once been known to somebody, had survived to become the facts of history. I suspect that even today one of the fascinations of ancient and medieval history is that it gives us the illusion of having all the facts at our disposal within a manageable compass: the nagging distinction between the facts of history and other facts about the past vanishes because the few known facts are all facts of history.

How is this passage different from the previous two passages? It is written in the first person.

How do you know? The author uses personal pronouns such as “I” and “me.”

Which text type is this? Nonfiction narrative.

THE KAPLAN METHOD FOR WRITING & LANGUAGE

The Kaplan Method for Writing & Language is the method you will use to boost your score on the Writing & Language Test. By understanding what the question is looking for, how it relates to the passage, and the questions you should ask yourself on Test Day, you will maximize the number of points you earn. Use the Kaplan Method for Writing & Language for every PSAT Writing & Language Test passage and question you encounter, whether practicing, completing your homework, working on a Practice Test, or taking the actual exam on Test Day.

The Kaplan Method for Writing & Language has three steps:

· Step 1: Read the passage and identify the issue

o If there’s an infographic, apply the Kaplan Method for Infographics.

· Step 2: Eliminate answer choices that do not address the issue

· Step 3: Plug in the remaining answer choices, and select the most correct, concise, and relevant one

On Test Day

The PSAT will expect you to be able to recognize errors in organization, pronouns, agreement, comparisons, development, sentence structure, modifiers, verbs, wordiness, style, tone, and syntax.

Let’s take a closer look at each step.

Step 1: Read the passage and identify the issue

This means:

· Rather than reading the whole passage and then answering all of the questions, you can answer questions as you read because they are mostly embedded in the text itself.

· When you see a number, stop reading and look at the question. If you can answer it with what you’ve read so far, do so. If you need more information, keep reading until you have enough context to answer the question.

Step 2: Eliminate answer choices that do not address the issue

Eliminating answer choices that do not address the issue:

· Increases your odds of getting the correct answer by removing obviously incorrect answer choices

Step 3: Plug in the remaining answer choices, and select the most correct, concise, and relevant one

Correct, concise, and relevant means that the answer choice you select:

· Makes sense when read with the correction

· Is as short as possible while retaining the information in the text

· Relates well to the passage overall

Remember

There is no incorrect answer penalty on the PSAT. When in doubt, eliminate what you can and then guess. You won’t lose points for guessing.

The correct answer will NOT:

· Change the intended meaning of the original sentence, paragraph, or passage

· Introduce new grammatical errors

On Test Day

If you have to guess, eliminate answer choices that are clearly incorrect and then choose the shortest one—the PSAT rewards students who know how to be concise.

You will see four Writing & Language passages on Test Day, each of which will have 11 questions. When you encounter a Writing & Language question, use the Kaplan Method, asking yourself a series of strategic thinking questions.

By asking these strategic thinking questions, you will be able to select the correct answer choice more easily and efficiently. Pausing to ask yourself questions before answering each question may seem like it takes a lot of time, but it actually saves you time by preventing you from weighing the four answer choices against each other; it’s better to ask questions that lead you directly to the correct answer than to debate which of four answers seems the least incorrect.

Let’s look at the following Writing & Language passage and questions. After the passage, there are two columns. The left column contains test-like questions. The column on the right features the strategic thinking a test expert employs when approaching the passage and questions presented.

Question

Strategic Thinking

Interest in developing wind power as an alternative renewable energy source has increased in recent years. In the eastern United States, exposed summits or ridge crests in the Appalachian Mountains have high wind power potential, and numerous wind power projects are being proposed by power companies. While generally supportive of energy development from renewable sources, the U.S. Fish & Wildlife Service, state wildlife agencies, nongovernmental organizations, and the public are concerned about potential impacts of wind power development on wildlife.

    1. NO CHANGE
    2. numerous wind power projects have been proposed.
    3. numerous wind power projects will be proposed.
    4. power companies have proposed numerous wind power projects.

Step 1: Read the passage and identify the issue

Can you identify a grammatical issue? No, the underlined phrase is grammatically correct.

When there is no apparent grammatical issue, check style, tone, and syntax. Are there any style, tone, or syntax errors? The sentence is written in the passive voice: the subject—“power companies”—comes after the object: “wind power projects.”

Step 2: Eliminate answer choices that do not address the issue

Which answer choice(s) can you eliminate? Eliminate B and C because they just change the verb tense rather than addressing the error.

Step 3: Plug in the remaining answer choices, and select the most correct, concise, and relevant one

Which is the correct answer? Choice (D)

THE KAPLAN METHOD FOR INFOGRAPHICS

The PSAT Writing & Language Test will contain one or more passages that include infographics. Each infographic will convey or expand on information related to the passage.

The Kaplan Method for Infographics has three steps:

· Step 1: Read the question

· Step 2: Examine the infographic

· Step 3: Predict and answer

Let’s examine these steps a bit more closely.

Step 1: Read the question

Analyze the question stem for information that will help you zero in on the specific parts of the infographic that apply to the question.

Step 2: Examine the infographic

Make sure to:

· Circle parts of the infographic that relate directly to the question

· Identify units of measurement, labels, and titles

Expert Tip

For more data-heavy infographics, you should also make note of any trends in the data or relationships between variables.

Step 3: Predict and answer

Just as in Step 3 of the Kaplan Method for Reading Comprehension, do not look at the answer choices until you’ve used the infographic to make a prediction. Asking questions and taking time to assess the given information before answering the test question will increase your chances of selecting the correct answer. Infographics vary in format—there can be tables, graphs, charts, and so on—so be flexible when you ask yourself these critical-thinking questions.

When you apply the Kaplan Method for Infographics, keep in mind that infographics will either represent data described in the passage or present new data that expand on what the passage is about.

Let’s look at the following Writing & Language infographic and questions. After the infographic, there are two columns. The left column contains test-like questions. The column on the right features the strategic thinking a test expert employs when approaching the infographic and questions presented.

Question

Strategic Thinking

Reduction of Flying Animals in the Appalachians

Species

2007

2008

2009

2010

Kestrel

415

383

320

268

Bat

543

421

267

233

Eagle

58

45

34

33

Hawk

196

138

85

85

  1. Assume that from 2007 to 2010, the number of wind power projects in the Appalachians increased. According to the table, during that same time period
    1. bat and bird populations decreased.
    2. bat and bird populations increased.
    3. bat and bird populations decreased and then increased.
    4. bat and bird populations did not change.

Step 1: Read the question

Assess the question to determine what part of the infographic to focus on.

What information in the question stem corresponds to the infographic? The years 2007 to 2010

Step 2: Examine the infographic

What are the units of measurement, labels, or titles? The units in the table are numbers. They aren’t labeled, so you’ll need to look for context; don’t blindly make assumptions. Because the numbers go down, and the title of the graph is “Reduction of Flying Animals in the Appalachians,” you can conclude that these must be populations.

Step 3: Predict and answer

Now that you understand the table, reread the question. Based on the question, what parts of the table do you need to look at? The number of each species as the years progress

Which is the correct answer? Choice (A)

Practice

You have seen the ways in which the PSAT tests you on Infographics in Writing & Language passages and the way a PSAT expert approaches these types of questions.

Use the Kaplan Method for Writing & Language to answer the three questions that accompany the following Writing & Language passage excerpt. Remember to look at the strategic thinking questions that have been laid out for you—some of the answers have been filled in, but you will have to complete the answers to others.

Use your answers to the strategic thinking questions to select the correct answer, just as you will on Test Day.

1. Questions 3—5 are based on the following passage.

2. Migrant Birds and Wind Power

During their seasonal migration, there are large numbers migrating through the mountainous landforms used for wind power. Wind power development could potentially impact populations of several species. Baseline information on nocturnally migrating birds and bats has been collected at some wind power development sites in the Appalachians, generally within a single season. However, a stronger scientific basis is critically needed to assess and mitigate risks at a regional scale.

The United States Geological Survey (USGS) is studying the distribution and flight patterns of birds and bats that migrate at night. Researchers analyze weather surveillance radar data (NEXRAD) to allow for a broad view of spring and fall migration through the Appalachians and assessing the response of migrant birds to mountain ridges and other prominent landforms. Although NEXRAD data provide information on the broad-scale spatial and temporal patterns of nocturnal migration through the region, the devices generally do not detect bird or bat targets within the altitudinal zone potentially occupied by wind turbines. Therefore, researchers are using two complementary ground-based techniques—acoustic detection and portable radar sampling—to obtain site-specific information on the abundance and flight characteristics of nocturnal migrants in lower airspace.

Questions

Strategic Thinking

    1. NO CHANGE
    2. large amounts
    3. innumerable birds and bats
    4. birds and bats

Step 1: Read the passage and identify the issue

Can you identify an issue? There’s a modifier issue—as written, the sentence states that large numbers are migrating, not the actual birds and bats.

Step 2: Eliminate answer choices that do not address the issue

Which answer choice(s) can you eliminate? _______________________________________

Step 3: Plug in the remaining answer choices, and select the most correct, concise, and relevant one

Do any of the remaining answer choices change the original meaning? Which one(s)? ________________________________________________

Which is the correct answer? ____

    1. NO CHANGE
    2. to assess
    3. assessed
    4. are assessors

Step 1: Read the passage and identify the issue

What is the issue? _____________________________________________________

Step 2: Eliminate answer choices that do not address the issue

Which answer choice(s) can you eliminate? _______________________________________

Step 3: Plug in the remaining answer choices, and select the most correct, concise, and relevant one

Which is the correct answer? _____

    1. NO CHANGE
    2. provides
    3. has provided
    4. will provide

Step 1: Read the passage and identify the issue

What part of speech is underlined? _______________________________________________

Does it agree with its subject in person and number? _______________________________

Step 2: Eliminate answer choices that do not address the issue

Which answer choice(s) can you eliminate? _______________________________________

Step 3: Plug in the remaining answer choices, and select the most correct, concise, and relevant one

Which is the correct answer? _______________

Perform

Now, try a test-like Writing & Language passage and infographic on your own. Give yourself 5 minutes to read the passage and answer the questions.

1. Questions 6-14 are based on the following passage and supplementary materials.

2. Business Entities

In the business sector of New York City, giant corporations conduct their business in colossal towers. But what about the individual who wants to operate a business without being subject to the whims of corporate shareholders? How can such an individual realize her dreams to own a business, perhaps not equal in size to large corporations, but at least their rival in ambition? Life goes on, for the eager entrepreneur has two options.

For the confident entrepreneur looking to succeed on her own, there is sole proprietorship. In a sole proprietorship, there is one owner who is “solely” responsible for the business and any decisions regarding it’s operation. Of course, as with all choices in life, it does not come without its share of disadvantages. Sole proprietorships aren’t seen as separate from their owners, so credit may be a problem, especially if you don’t have a lot of financial assets on hand. You’re fine if the business is lucrative, but if not, sole proprietorships can be a scary proposition because being the only boss also means taking on any and all debt that your business incurs.

If our entrepreneur is lucky enough to have a group of like-minded acquaintances with who to start her company, she and her associates might instead opt to form a partnership. A partnership sacrifices some of the operational freedom that comes with a sole proprietorship, as you now have a bunch of “friends” to convince before you can have things your way on any business decisions that need to be made however these same individuals will also be chipping in on expenses and sharing responsibility for any debt that the business may incur.

Profits are shared with your partners on payday, but the extra support they can provide if the business struggles helps to make up for that. Partnerships, however, are less lucrative for the individual than sole proprietorships.

While the partnership seems to alleviate many of the problems that plague the sole proprietorship, it does have its share of disadvantages. In a sole proprietorship, the business could be sold if you, the owner, desire it, but a partnership requires consent from your partners before it can take place. Moreover, unlike corporations, which come with limited liability for their shareholders, if the business runs deeply into debt, you are still responsible for your complete share of the debt, even if you do have others to share that debt with. When viewed in this light, the “evil corporations” surrounding us may be a necessary evil indeed.

A double bar graph titled Partnership versus Sole Proprietorship Net Income, 2002 to 2005. The vertical axis is labeled Average net income per individual. The horizontal axis is labeled by year from 2002 to 2005. The graph key indicates that the darker bars represent Sole Proprietorships and the lighter bars represent Partnerships. For 2002, the height of the darker bar is 10,374 and the height of the lighter bar is 54,289. For 2003, the height of the darker bar is 10,216 and the height of the lighter bar is 59,133. For 2004, the height of the darker bar is 10,938 and the height of the lighter bar is 70,284. For 2005, the height of the darker bar is 11,354 and the height of the lighter bar is 89,943.

6.

1. NO CHANGE

2. Never fear,

3. Don’t worry,

4. In fact,

7.

1. NO CHANGE

2. their

3. its

4. its’

8.

1. NO CHANGE

2. sole proprietorship

3. business

4. this operation

9.

1. NO CHANGE

2. with

3. between

4. by

10.

1. NO CHANGE

2. who’s

3. whose

4. whom

11.

1. NO CHANGE

2. made, however

3. made; however,

4. made, however,

12.

1. NO CHANGE

2. You will share profits with your partners

3. Profits will be shared with your partners

4. Partners will share your profits

13.Which choice best reflects the data in the graph?

1. NO CHANGE

2. Sole proprietorships, however, are more lucrative for the individual than partnerships.

3. Partnerships, however, have a lower net income per person than sole proprietorships.

4. Partnerships are also more lucrative for the individual than are sole proprietorships.

14.

1. NO CHANGE

2. this partnership

3. this consent

4. this sale

On your own

1.

1. Questions 1—11 are based on the following passage and supplementary materials.

2. The North American Suburb

The North American suburb is an architectural and civic phenomenon distinct from suburban areas in any other part of the world. It was a counterreaction to the need, especially keen after World War II, to “get away” from the city and all the noise, pollution, and general nastiness that went along with it. Cities were where the factories were, and the factories before modern pollution and safety standards were horrific things to behold. Of those who could get out, many did.

Suburban communities, however, were not sufficient by themselves to support life. The people who lived in them needed to work, shop, and socialize, and most of the active part of their lives remained fixed in urban centers. Paradoxically, suburbs were clustered around their parent cities, with the suburban inhabitants avoiding the city center.

All this seems perfectly logical and inevitable. The suburb should be the ambiguous halfway point between city and country—away from the noise, congestion, and pollution but not so far away that there’s no access to culture, to income, to all the exciting pitfalls of urban life. In reality, though, few suburbs have actually approached this ideal. Moreover, the structure of the modern suburb, while offering a respite from city pollution, has created health and environmental risks of its own.

Suburban zoning laws have forced the separation of living and commercial spaces. As such, the city dweller’s fond experience of walking down the block to the neighborhood café may be rare or entirely alien to a suburbanite. Should suburban dwellers, on a Saturday morning, desire a change of scenery and a cup of coffee, they must get in their cars and drive some distance. Come to think of it, nearly everything aside from the nearby houses and the occasional neighborhood park requires an automobile trip. All of this driving comes at the cost of pollution and a lack of daily exercise. Surely, we must begin to balance the appeal and freedom of the car with ecological and civic responsibility.

[1] Some have charged that America doesn’t need any more of these bland developments, that these projects line construction companies’ pockets without contributing much to the value and diversity of American culture. [2] I, however, think that the problem of suburbs can be described as one of degree rather than kind. [3] We don’t need to abandon suburbs altogether; instead, we need to more knowingly pursue that ideal of the best of city and country. [4] Suburbs could be fascinating and beautiful places; we need only exercise our power to determine the nature of the places in which we live.

A double bar graph titled City and Suburb Growth Shifts. The vertical axis is labeled Population Growth as a percent. The graph key indicates that the darker bars represent Primary Cities and the lighter bars represent Suburbs. For the Annual Average Growth from 2000 to 2010, the height of the darker bar is zero point 4 and the height of the lighter bar is 1 point 4. For July 2010 to 2011, the height of the darker bar is 1 point 1 and the height of the lighter bar is 0 point 9.

1.

1. NO CHANGE

2. an avoidance of

3. a response to

4. an intensifier of

2.

1. NO CHANGE

2. get out many did.

3. get out . . . many did.

4. get out; many did.

3.

1. NO CHANGE

2. self-sufficient.

3. entirely sufficient by themselves to support life.

4. sufficiently able to adequately support life by themselves.

4.

1. NO CHANGE

2. Therefore, suburbs were unnecessarily far from their parent cities, hampering suburban inhabitants’ intent to commute to the city for work and play.

3. Therefore, suburbs were clustered around their parent cities, with suburban inhabitants commuting daily to the city center for work and play.

4. Suburbs therefore developed the amenities needed for suburbanites who were unwilling to ever go back into the city.

5.

1. NO CHANGE

2. drawbacks

3. perils

4. benefits

6.

1. NO CHANGE

2. modern suburb while offering a respite from city pollution has created

3. modern suburb, (while offering a respite from city pollution) has created

4. modern suburb; while offering a respite from city pollution; has created

7.

1. NO CHANGE

2. has

3. having

4. had

8.

1. NO CHANGE

2. As fate would have it, nearly everything

3. Contrary to popular belief, nearly everything

4. In fact, nearly everything

9.

1. NO CHANGE

2. I, however, believe that the problem of the suburbs should be described as one of degree rather than kind.

3. I, however, see the problem of suburbs as one of degree rather than kind.

4. I, however, think that one can see the problem of suburbs as one of degree rather than kind.

10.Which answer choice best describes the data in the graph as it relates to the passage?

1. Despite the growing awareness of the shortcomings of suburban living, America’s suburban population continues to grow faster than that of the country’s primary cities.

2. It also seems that Americans’ opinions of the suburbs are objectively changing—from 2010 to 2011, population growth in cities outstripped growth in the suburbs.

3. Suburbs may have their naysayers, but the fact remains that it is hard to detect any change in where Americans are settling.

4. Contrary to continued positive perceptions of the suburbs, population growth swung back in favor of primary cities in the early twenty-first century.

11.What is the best placement for the sentence featured in the answer to the previous question?

1. After sentence 1

2. After sentence 2

3. After sentence 3

4. After sentence 4