College essays that made a difference - Princeton Review 2010

College essays that made a difference - Princeton Review 2010

Acknowledgments

Introduction

The parts of this book

Editor’s note

Essay fundamentals

Grammar and form

What colleges want to see in your essay: writing ability and insight into who you are

Topics that work, topics that don’t

So how much does the essay count, anyway?

Q & A with admissions officers

Subject matter and writing

Inside the admissions office

The essay’s influence

General application questions

The applicants

Aaron Antrim

Adam Berlinsky-Schine

Alison Kaufmann

Allison Kay Range

Amy Berg

Andrea Salas

Andrew Collins

Andrew Harrison Giordano

Andrew Maxwell Mangino

Audrey Nath

Brandon Molina

Brian Tracy

Candace Seu

Caroline Ang

Caroline Habbert

Caroline Mellor

Caroline Lucy Morgan

Chelsea R. Stitt

Claudia Gold

Clayton Kennedy

Daniel Freeman

Daniel Mela

David Auerbach

David Gibbs

Diana Schoofield

Elizabeth Jeffers Orr

Ellison Ward

Emily Allen

Emma Fricke

Eric Osborne

Faith Nancy Lin

Fatiman Kausar Asghar

Gaurav P. Patel

Gianna Marzilli

Haley A. Connor

Hannah Rebecca Stern

Heather Fireman

James Gregory

Jamie Bushell

Jamie Manos

Jane Sha

Jessica Lau

Jessie Seymour

Jing Yi Hon

Joann Rebecca Gage

Joseph A. Rago

Joseph I. Malchow

Julia Hypatia Orth

Julie Yau-Yee Tam

Karen A. Lee

Katharine Anne Thomas

Kathleen B. Blackburn

Kelly Duong

Kevin James Tostado

Kimen Field

Kristen T. Martinez

Kristin Shantz

Lauren Catharine Weller Moore

Lillian Diaz-Przybyl

Lindsay Claiborn

Lindsay J. Cushing

Lyman Thai

Maria Inez Velazquez

Megan Herman

Melissa Henlea

Meredith Narrowe

Michael Harris

Michele Cash

Mieko Y. Beyer

Nitin Shah

Peter Dean

Philip James Madelen Rucker

Rishabn Chandra

Robyn Rose Schneider

Sean Mcclellan

Serin Ipek Seckin

Stephanie Cross

Stephanie Wun-Lee Chow

Stuart Peter Dekker

Tracy Serge

Victoria Mariel Barone

Wendy Weinerman

Wenjun Jing

Xueyang (Sean) Li

Anonymous

Where they got in

Appendix: They’re, their, and there: grammar and writing tips